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The Firebird

Posted by WritersBlock - December 22nd, 2008


My cage! My cage!
Lest they find me out of my cage!
Battered and swollen,
Bruised and bleeding, I'd be.
The guards, they were pacing,
My heart, it was racing.
Lest they find me out of my cage.

The king, the king,
He wanders the halls,
Draped in fine robes,
Sewn by his queen, to be.
The king, he was plottin'
For his lady to be forgotten,
Gutted and thrown out to sea.

Treason and murder, treason and murder,
They worked me into a rage.
I did no such crime,
Yet I'm paying the time, encaged.
The guards know no reason,
To believe in my treason,
While the tyrant king continues his ways.

Lies upon lies, lies upon lies,
The work of the king, a cunning disguise.
Locked in my cage,
Which is locked in a room, up high.
The guards do not notice,
That my freedom is closest,
In their absence, I slip through the bars.

Be quiet, be quiet,
While the king is asleep,
I hear very faintly,
A sound almost saintly, a bird.
From my cage to the shadows,
I glance through the window,
As I search for the creature I heard.

The cage, the cage,
Right there in my cage.
Its plumage, on fire,
It lit up my room, with flames.
This creature of light,
A miraculous sight,
A mystery of no other name.

The bird, the bird,
Let its presence be heard.
It beckoned me forth,
Into the fireplace, deep and cold.
With the touch of a brick,
A most intricate trick,
A passage, an escape from these walls.

I follow, I follow,
This fiery swallow,
Through passages thick,
Through passages thin, I crawl.
In a flicker of light,
The bird escapes from my sight,
And I escape into the king's sleeping halls.

A whisper, a whisper,
The smoke from a torch burning crisp.
A shadow of hope,
A scape from this mortar and stone.
Chasing the nothings,
I burn for the bluffing,
Of a bird conjured from broken bones.

The king, the king,
He lays down his guard,
As I'm driven by madness,
of a bird that was never there.
Like a hunter at night,
I steal through the shadows,
In his chambers, I bid him beware.

The guards, the guards,
They don't notice a thing.
The ultimate crime,
The death of a tyrant, a king.
With a blade in my palm,
I anchor his arms,
Slice throat like a slice of a pear.

Magician, magician,
Oh, what have I done?
First to the crime,
Cleanse me of guilt, of sin.
You saw me in action,
Not even a distraction,
Would counter my lust for the king.

The flames, the flames,
They burn in my eyes,
The magician's sorrow,
Was infinitely hollow, an act.
He gave me a grin,
And procured from within
His jacket, a card so absurd.

A joker, a joker,
A fire breathing master of whim.
A token of mystery,
A burden through history, a card.
A success for a price,
I'm his sacrifice,
Doomed by a fiery bird.

These tricks, these tricks!
Played for the fool that I am.
Murdered the king,
For a bird of the magician, himself.
A new day, a new king,
yet the laws stay the same,
And I'm locked up and back on the shelf.

My cage! My cage!
Lest they find me out of my cage!
Battered and swollen,
Bruised and bleeding, I'd be.
The guards, they were pacing,
My heart, it was racing.
Lest they find me out of my cage.


Comments

what'e

^ Same as that guy ^

Wow, I knew you were really into writing, but I never thought you were into poetry. I'm not exactly an authority on this sort of literature, but this is definitely good stuff! (Well, the fact that I've actually read it to the end speaks for itself) ;D

Haha, I'm not too huge on poetry, really, I feel like my writing shouldn't be almost entirely made up of 2 or 3 stanza poems made up in 5-10 minutes. My two main poem pieces are quite long. This one and Impatiens (which I posted a while back), and I'm quite proud of them.
Thanks for reading the whole thing. ;P

1. lol indeed (stupid wii browser, why does the wii have only 88 MB of RAM)

2. it was Re-education Through Labor

3. did I say 8 inches of snow? it's more like 14 now, you don't know much about it? it's like sand, but it freezes to the touch and it falls out of the sky, it's not a major problem, not compared with the ice X(

1. I con't really elaborate on your rule 10 right thar. :(

2. Of course it was. How did I not know that?

3. I know WHAT snow is, but I don't know much more than that. I have no personal experience.

cardiovascular

What in Christ's name is going on here?

Nice job with the imagery.
Felt like I actually killed the king.

Only part that I didn't understand was "a sound almost saintly".
Really don't know how a sound could be described that way.

Congrats though.

THe bird is this guy's ticket to freedom, so hearing its call is like a voice from heaven itself. I thought that was pretty clear. :\

this party is lackin'
I'll send that bitch packin'!

now that I think of it
it is quite shit

I can't write :(
<a href="http://mizox.newgrounds.com/news/post/242976">http://mizox.newgrounds.com/news/post /242976</a>

no worries, I have other computers

won't crawl, on my knees for you
won't believe the lies that hide the truth
won't sweat, one more drop for you

ah, right :P don't worry, once I take control of the stratosphere with my temperature control array.... wait, no, that wouldn't be a good idea, climate's unstable as it is, hmm... eh, just get a passport, then you'll know

I've been to America during the summer, but that was only in California and Nevada, anyway (do they even get snow there?). Eh, the time will come around.

I'm your artist, sparklepants, hit me (bitterclock) up on aim, so I can get this party rolling.