Score: 7

"=/ yeah"

submission: Our Love

date: March 7, 2008

That song sucks bad. I agree that the use of the guitar hero controller was funny, and the animation wasn't too bad, but I think that you could have put more detail into it. For example, instead of having the lyrics on the screen, maybe have images that reflect the lyrics. You could have it so that it's night time, and they're sitting by a camp fire, and a faded image of harry potter or gandalf would appear in the sky. That's just me with ideas, but, yeah, something like that would really bring the graphics up a notch and make it more interesting. But as it is, it was quite well done, good lip synching.
Keep it up!

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Score: 8

"lol"

submission: A Weird Day at College

date: March 7, 2008

Great story. It kept me entertained for the whole time, good job. Despite the lack of lip synching and other numerous cuts in animation quality ;D it shows a fair amount of effort put into telling the story.
The best animation I've seen from you yet.

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Score: 2

"Almost as bad as the spam flashes"

submission: Pornography!

date: March 7, 2008

Ok, you create a flash to complain about these flashes, you really could make an improvement from that, underachievement is nothing to be proud of. I doubt it took 7 of you to make that flash, so, raise your standards a bit, if you've got something to say, you don't have to make a flash about it. I think you're all just making this flash for the attention. I find it disappointing how flashes like this can pass because of the +1 protect point voters...
Try to get an actual plot and character development next time you make a flash, and maybe then you'll get some respected attention.

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Score: 7

"It takes the reference to enjoy this game..."

submission: Numberwang!

date: March 6, 2008

I give it a 10.
I'm Simon, who's from space.
And we're both on 43 except for Julie who's behind on 67.
I prefer the show, but it's not a bad idea, gotta work on making it entertaining enough to appeal to those who don't get the reference, and maybe add more to it, so that it's less boring, it's not as fast paced as the actual show, so you've got to compensate for that.
Imaginary nimbers: Shifty-six.
Ohh... I'm afraid shifty-six is a real number...

=D

Score: 8

"funny"

submission: Andersson's Birthday

date: March 5, 2008

It ends kind of abruptly, and it leaves me thinking "what will he do with a rocket launcher?" Nice birthday present, and a funny animation.
Graphics could be improved and the volume of the voice acting could be quieter, but overall, it was amusing, your animations are a lot different to the average flash, in terms of style.
Good work.

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Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: The Halloweenator

date: March 5, 2008

It seems a little slow in conversation, I think that was dragged out a bit too much, but the art and animation was really great and the voice acting was pretty solid too. The ending was funny and a bit unexpected, it was done well.

Good work.

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Score: 8

"Plot = weird"

submission: Love You

date: March 5, 2008

I don't really get the connection between the plot and the title, I think the music is a little qirky for someone committing suicide (?)
But the drawing was done well, animation could have been a bit smoother, but overall, it's a good little flash. Not too much to comment on, due to length, but it definitely showcases your ability, so it's a great start to build from, and it's a good sign for things to come.
Keep at it.

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Score: 9

"Funny"

submission: Shorts To Wear Pants To

date: March 5, 2008

This was really well done. For a collab that was open to anyone, all the parts were really good, I had a great time watching it, it looked like a blast to make. The layout and presentation of the collab was really slick (the intro THX [that sound company] parody was really funny). Great job on a successful collab. Gets my 5.
=D

Score: 5

"honest review..."

submission: Another Hentai Quiz 2

date: March 5, 2008

The way I see it, this type of flash is not very hard to create. Anyone who can search the pictures can make a quiz like this. Although the video is an original addition, but I don't really find this sort of thing worth a high vote/good review, because the video and pictures are created by other people, you just added the quiz to it. I'm a Family Guy fan, so I found the questions really easy, but even if you're not a Family Guy fan, you don't even need to look up the answers to get the answer, because of the wrong answer, go back one question, you can just guess. I think this is a bad thing. It takes away the element of challenge to the game. Also, as a Family Guy fan, I found that the answers wouldn't be too hard for someone that doesn't really watch the show, so it's kind of just like handing out the pictures, with no real challenge, it's not really rewarding. If you make the questions more challenging, maybe have a checkpoint or rounds system, give it more of a Family Guy theme, incorporate more of your original style into it (maybe draw the family guy characters to stand beside each question, to brighten it up a bit) because as it is, I can't decide whether you have talent at flash or not. I also thought that the arrows, and the hand drawn "Last question" text were very messy, and lowered the starnard of the flash a bit.
Overall, it's not bad, but certainly could use some original flair, to make it stand out from other flashes like this. I know I probably sound like a big jerk, but I think that you could do better if you make it more unique. For the most part the layout was very sleek.

Good luck with future projects, sorry to sound so harsh, I probably should have pointed out some more good things...

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Score: 10

"A lot of fun"

submission: X-HOC

date: February 28, 2008

This game was a LOT of fun. Took me a few tries to get past the first round, so it's definitely a challenge, but it was fun, too. It's a little difficult switching players all the time, but it looks cool, the opponents are programmed well. It's a great game. I'll recommend it for the sports games collection.

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