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Age/Gender: 17, Male
Location: Australia
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I make music.

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Score: 8
The Halloweenator

"Nice"

submission: The Halloweenator
date: March 5, 2008

It seems a little slow in conversation, I think that was dragged out a bit too much, but the art and animation was really great and the voice acting was pretty solid too. The ending was funny and a bit unexpected, it was done well.

Good work.

-Review Request Club-

March 6, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.
I agree with you (and many others) stating that the conversation was too slow throughout the animation. This was my first attempt at comedy, and I have learned now that proper timing is vital to keep people's attention and to get the joke across. It will be a little while before I attempt another comedy.

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Score: 8
Love You

"Plot = weird"

submission: Love You
date: March 5, 2008

I don't really get the connection between the plot and the title, I think the music is a little qirky for someone committing suicide (?)
But the drawing was done well, animation could have been a bit smoother, but overall, it's a good little flash. Not too much to comment on, due to length, but it definitely showcases your ability, so it's a great start to build from, and it's a good sign for things to come.
Keep at it.

-Review Request Club-

March 6, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.
Wouldn't it be funny if she jumped from a love blimp?

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Score: 9
Shorts To Wear Pants To

"Funny"

date: March 5, 2008

This was really well done. For a collab that was open to anyone, all the parts were really good, I had a great time watching it, it looked like a blast to make. The layout and presentation of the collab was really slick (the intro THX [that sound company] parody was really funny). Great job on a successful collab. Gets my 5.
=D

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Score: 5
Another Hentai Quiz 2

"honest review..."

date: March 5, 2008

The way I see it, this type of flash is not very hard to create. Anyone who can search the pictures can make a quiz like this. Although the video is an original addition, but I don't really find this sort of thing worth a high vote/good review, because the video and pictures are created by other people, you just added the quiz to it. I'm a Family Guy fan, so I found the questions really easy, but even if you're not a Family Guy fan, you don't even need to look up the answers to get the answer, because of the wrong answer, go back one question, you can just guess. I think this is a bad thing. It takes away the element of challenge to the game. Also, as a Family Guy fan, I found that the answers wouldn't be too hard for someone that doesn't really watch the show, so it's kind of just like handing out the pictures, with no real challenge, it's not really rewarding. If you make the questions more challenging, maybe have a checkpoint or rounds system, give it more of a Family Guy theme, incorporate more of your original style into it (maybe draw the family guy characters to stand beside each question, to brighten it up a bit) because as it is, I can't decide whether you have talent at flash or not. I also thought that the arrows, and the hand drawn "Last question" text were very messy, and lowered the starnard of the flash a bit.
Overall, it's not bad, but certainly could use some original flair, to make it stand out from other flashes like this. I know I probably sound like a big jerk, but I think that you could do better if you make it more unique. For the most part the layout was very sleek.

Good luck with future projects, sorry to sound so harsh, I probably should have pointed out some more good things...

-Review Request Club-

March 9, 2008

Author's Response:

thanks I'll keep it in mind.

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Score: 10
X-HOC

"A lot of fun"

submission: X-HOC
date: February 28, 2008

This game was a LOT of fun. Took me a few tries to get past the first round, so it's definitely a challenge, but it was fun, too. It's a little difficult switching players all the time, but it looks cool, the opponents are programmed well. It's a great game. I'll recommend it for the sports games collection.

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Score: 6
Mortal Kombat 2.2 Remake

"Pretty good"

date: February 28, 2008

The sprites are done well, but this lacks a good plot and originality. The sprites appear to just do the same as the original game, they don't have anything special to set them apart from the original game, especially since the plot is just a couple of fights. If you make a decent story out of it, work some more creative moves in there and this movie will be a lot better. Definitely not bad, though.
Keep it up!

-Review Request Club-

February 29, 2008

Author's Response:

Plot is taken directly from the game... I am just doing it by altering it slightly.

Well the point of this animation is to emulate what the game was with a bit of pizazz and that's what the glow effects and such are doing.

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Score: 10
Machina Humana

"Great"

submission: Machina Humana
date: February 28, 2008

The greaphics are really good, for the most part, it's a high quality, slick, entertaining animation. The plot is good, it flows with the music really well, and it's really interesting to watch. The flickering light was done really well, and it's awesome to see a bit of 3D type animation in there (rotation of walls/shading, etc...) so overall, it's a very good flash. I'd like to see what you'd do if you broke away from the vague plotline flowing with the music and came up with characters and a script and made a proper conventional movie.

Great work.

-Review Request Club-

February 29, 2008

Author's Response:

Thank you, I do need to change a bit in style, explore other stuff... not on my next one though, the next one is another song based animation. But I an thinking about making something more along the lines of a normal story with plot etc... it would probably not have voices though.. I-m not into using voice acting, or maybe I could... I'll just finish what I'm working on right now... which will take a while and then I'll use your suggestion.

Thanks for the review,

Gustavo M.

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Score: 8
A Shot to Remember

"Great preloader"

submission: A Shot to Remember
date: February 28, 2008

Animation is pretty good, but a little too messy. I liked your other one more, how it was a lot neater, this one could use some more backgrounds though. The concept was real nice, I really like the part where she's in black and white, holding her fingers like a gun and the transformation there is slick. Good work, could be tidier, but all round, it's decent.

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February 29, 2008

Author's Response:

Yeah it is quite messier, and I would like to say that it's on pourpose... but not really , I had a bit less experience and that bit of messyness is caused by that.. luckily it has a more forgiving atmosphere for that.. and yeah I realize I have some "plain background" fetish or something.

Thanks for the review,

Gustavo M.

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Score: 9
I Am One

"Nice graphics"

submission: I Am One
date: February 28, 2008

It was really well animated. Great job there. It was very entertaining, also. I think it would be cool if there was a background where the stuffed bear was, but other than that, it was smooth, it was a little twisted, it was great to watch. Nice work.

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February 29, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks alot "great to watch" I love that reaction from one of my movies, I like this particular animation ,there is something about it that subconsciously makes me a bit happy... maybe something good happened while I was making it... anyways

Thanks for the review,

Gustavo M.

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Score: 10
A How to of Sprites

"Very useful"

date: February 25, 2008

It's got a great basic layout for beginners to understand it easily. It also goes into good depth, so that you can make something decent with the info in the tut. Great work, I'll recommend it for the tutorial collection. Great work.

-Review Request Club- =P

February 25, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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