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The sprites are done well, but this lacks a good plot and originality. The sprites appear to just do the same as the original game, they don't have anything special to set them apart from the original game, especially since the plot is just a couple of fights. If you make a decent story out of it, work some more creative moves in there and this movie will be a lot better. Definitely not bad, though.
Keep it up!
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Author's Response:
Plot is taken directly from the game... I am just doing it by altering it slightly.
Well the point of this animation is to emulate what the game was with a bit of pizazz and that's what the glow effects and such are doing.
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The greaphics are really good, for the most part, it's a high quality, slick, entertaining animation. The plot is good, it flows with the music really well, and it's really interesting to watch. The flickering light was done really well, and it's awesome to see a bit of 3D type animation in there (rotation of walls/shading, etc...) so overall, it's a very good flash. I'd like to see what you'd do if you broke away from the vague plotline flowing with the music and came up with characters and a script and made a proper conventional movie.
Great work.
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Author's Response:
Thank you, I do need to change a bit in style, explore other stuff... not on my next one though, the next one is another song based animation. But I an thinking about making something more along the lines of a normal story with plot etc... it would probably not have voices though.. I-m not into using voice acting, or maybe I could... I'll just finish what I'm working on right now... which will take a while and then I'll use your suggestion.
Thanks for the review,
Gustavo M.
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Animation is pretty good, but a little too messy. I liked your other one more, how it was a lot neater, this one could use some more backgrounds though. The concept was real nice, I really like the part where she's in black and white, holding her fingers like a gun and the transformation there is slick. Good work, could be tidier, but all round, it's decent.
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Author's Response:
Yeah it is quite messier, and I would like to say that it's on pourpose... but not really , I had a bit less experience and that bit of messyness is caused by that.. luckily it has a more forgiving atmosphere for that.. and yeah I realize I have some "plain background" fetish or something.
Thanks for the review,
Gustavo M.
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It was really well animated. Great job there. It was very entertaining, also. I think it would be cool if there was a background where the stuffed bear was, but other than that, it was smooth, it was a little twisted, it was great to watch. Nice work.
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Author's Response:
Thanks alot "great to watch" I love that reaction from one of my movies, I like this particular animation ,there is something about it that subconsciously makes me a bit happy... maybe something good happened while I was making it... anyways
Thanks for the review,
Gustavo M.
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It's got a great basic layout for beginners to understand it easily. It also goes into good depth, so that you can make something decent with the info in the tut. Great work, I'll recommend it for the tutorial collection. Great work.
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Thanks!
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That was weird. Nice style. The voice acting and pauses after each line, they were really good. Very funny. Definitely weird, funny. You have nice hair.
Good job!
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I like puzzle games, and this one was fun. I'd definitely play this one again to try and beat it. Simple and fun. Bonuses make it interesting, so it's a slick little puzzle game. Well presented too.
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I think that the choices in the game could have been larger, and instead of just leading to immediate death, you could have them lead to many different directions, so there's less "wrong" paths, so you can get a higher replay value out of it. It's not bad, but it's a limited "choose your own adventure flash.
Graphics badly need touching up, characters are inconsistent, and sound effects are a little too plain, obviously taken from a site with a bunch of basic sound effects. But if you fix those things up, you'll have a really fun game to play (eg. the Ray games). Keep at it, you've almost got it.
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Good parts-
The stream of orange was done well, as well as when he wipes it out of his eyes. The ending is good, graphically and plot-wise.
Bad parts-
The character design is very simple and the background and landscape detail is lacking. Also, at the end, I was just waiting for a "squish" sound effect.
Overall-
Pretty good, but detail and character requires more work. Plot was decent, amusing.
Good job.
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Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! In the future I'm paying way more attention to sounds and details. I'm glad you liked it.
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Action looks like a huge step up from part 1 (now that the plot has been set). Script please! I'd really like to get started on making some music for CH 2. Maybe I could do something for the movie and put it in the BVG as a bit of an extra showcase for the movie?
Can't wait. Good work.
Author's Response:
Great Idea, go ahead and do that.
Check you email.
Thanks.
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