Score: 9

"lol"

submission: Joe N Stan: Tripped Out

date: February 23, 2008

That was weird. Nice style. The voice acting and pauses after each line, they were really good. Very funny. Definitely weird, funny. You have nice hair.

Good job!

Score: 8

"Interesting"

submission: Pirate Chains

date: February 21, 2008

I like puzzle games, and this one was fun. I'd definitely play this one again to try and beat it. Simple and fun. Bonuses make it interesting, so it's a slick little puzzle game. Well presented too.

Score: 7

"Choices..."

submission: Decisions of Life

date: February 21, 2008

I think that the choices in the game could have been larger, and instead of just leading to immediate death, you could have them lead to many different directions, so there's less "wrong" paths, so you can get a higher replay value out of it. It's not bad, but it's a limited "choose your own adventure flash.
Graphics badly need touching up, characters are inconsistent, and sound effects are a little too plain, obviously taken from a site with a bunch of basic sound effects. But if you fix those things up, you'll have a really fun game to play (eg. the Ray games). Keep at it, you've almost got it.

Score: 7

"Funny"

submission: Tangerine Madness!

date: February 21, 2008

Good parts-
The stream of orange was done well, as well as when he wipes it out of his eyes. The ending is good, graphically and plot-wise.

Bad parts-
The character design is very simple and the background and landscape detail is lacking. Also, at the end, I was just waiting for a "squish" sound effect.

Overall-
Pretty good, but detail and character requires more work. Plot was decent, amusing.
Good job.

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Score: 10

"Awesome"

submission: Chaos Sonic chp 2 Trailer

date: February 20, 2008

Action looks like a huge step up from part 1 (now that the plot has been set). Script please! I'd really like to get started on making some music for CH 2. Maybe I could do something for the movie and put it in the BVG as a bit of an extra showcase for the movie?
Can't wait. Good work.

Score: 7

"Nice idea, lacking presentation"

submission: Short Term Memory Test

date: February 19, 2008

If you can present it in a slick and neat way, this game would have a lot more appeal. The buttons for the music are pretty ugly, the background is plain, the timer could be more appealing with a bit more depth. Nice programming though, you did a decent job with that. If you can work in some textures and gradients that add depth to the background, present the numbers and text box and everything in an organised and cool way, this could do pretty well, although it doesn't have much in terms of replay value and entertainment, if you could make it a little more innovative and unique, then it'd certainly be fun to play.

I got 9 digits.

Good job

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Score: 9

"Awesome"

submission: Fat, bald soccer player

date: February 19, 2008

The style and animation is funky fresh. Funny, groovy, great to watch. However, the FBF is very basic, and it'll look much more slick if you can fill out those frames and make it more smooth and less static. Nice music too.

Great work, very enjoyable.

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Score: 9

"Pretty funny"

submission: The Narrator's Love Story

date: February 19, 2008

Pretty decent graphics, the light on the screen was a little weird how he was behind it, but the plot was pretty good, amusing, voice acting was decent. I could see a lot of effort went into this, and it came out at quite a decent quality. Good job.

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Score: 8

"Truckin' funny"

submission: Happy Censorship Day!

date: February 19, 2008

Nice idea. *recommends for censorship day collection*
I was expecting a lot of bleeping, but this idea was better. Clever. I don't know where the "mild audio, mild text" fits in, there was none!

Good job. Entertaining.

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Score: 7

"Pretty decent"

submission: Alert! Monsters At 5:23!

date: February 19, 2008

Animation style is good, it could have been a bit smoother, but it was fun to watch. Easter egg was random, not bad, but the actual movie was better.

With a bit more practice, I'm sure your skills will become more tidy and better to watch.
Nice movie, certainly interesting. O.o
Good job.

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