Score: 7

"Nice concept"

submission: Cow in Submarine

date: February 19, 2008

Graphics aren't too bad, although I think background detail was lacking. It didn't look too "underwater-like", could have put in some coral, shells, fish, maybe a crab walking along the bottom. Maybe tint the layers blue to give a bit more depth, add a shipwreck, diver, or treasure chest or something like that to really bring the location to life. As for the submarine, it looked pretty cool, but the tweening looked a little weird and maybe it could have had bubbles coming out of the back to indicate forward thrust. Also, the submarine sank awfully fast for an object underwater. I think if you can capture the location, touch up on the movements and give the physics a bit more of a life like quality, then you'll have a very nice animation. But right now, it's quite enjoyable enough, the cartoon style is cool, and the cows were amusing. Good job.
Keep it up.

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Score: 10

"Seriously"

submission: TheMostBeautifulDrawings

date: February 15, 2008

That was incredibly amusing. The drawings were so bad. You did a good job making fun of them.
Your art and animation was good. Kind of teacher-like, pointing out grammar and missing legs in red. Very funny, very enjoyable. Makes for a good laugh.

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Score: 8

"Funneh"

submission: Stan and Joe:"Valentine?"

date: February 13, 2008

It's very short, but the joke is pretty good. Nice work. I'll recommend it for the valentines collection.

WB

<3

Score: 8

"Nice appearance"

submission: Mouse Avoider #30

date: February 10, 2008

One of the better mouse avoiders in terms of appearance. It's tough, which is good. But I think you need to add something extra to this that sets it apart from the other games like this. I like playing games that have a uniqueness about them. It'd be cool if you had something in this game that made it more interesting. Maybe have the leves as unlockables, and maybe integrate a bit of a puzzle theme into it. I don't know, just diversify it. Maybe also, you could make the levels less dark, the black gets a bit much after a while, and maybe have different backgrounds to choose from. If you can manage to package it right, you'll have a game that people will want to play through a few times. But as it is now, it shows that you've mastered the basic mouse avoider. Move onwards and upwards.

Good job.

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Score: 6

"It's nothing spectacular"

submission: Droids Vs Aliens

date: February 7, 2008

But it's decent. The camera quality was poor though. A clearer image would make this a lot better. Also, maybe work for a longer movie with a bit more of a plot, it just looked like a random skirmish with lego characters...

But it's stop motion, so you automatically get extra points for that. Nice try.

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Score: 2

"Not much of a flash..."

submission: Windows Errors 2007

date: February 7, 2008

I don't really enjoy this sort of thing. As far as I know you just grabbed a bunch of "funny" error messages off a website, and there are some much better windows parodies out there, that have some more originality to them. The presentation is poor. A couple of buttons, forward and back? That means it's just a slideshow! You could have at least made the actual error messages into buttons. You could have done a ton of stuff to make this better, have an on/off button for the music, have more than one song to choose from. Have a proper background, make the buttons more aesthetic, make it more interactive. Make it something you can be proud of, use your own jokes, the different versions of windows error messages makes it look even more mediochre. I hope you try harder and put much more effort into your next flash. It's nothing personal, it's just that anyone could string together a flash like this in half an hour, without any real knowledge of flash beforehand.

Sorry =/

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Score: 9

"This was a great flash"

submission: Inward Singing

date: February 7, 2008

Graphics were great, theway you constructed the scene around the conversation. 1 isseu I had was where you changed their appearance, they had no noses, and then a moment later, they did! It'd be better if you kept it all in one style. But other than that, it was awesome, great to watch, funny, too!

Good job.

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Score: 10

"High quality animation"

submission: Darfur Satire Shorts

date: February 4, 2008

The plots were also very well laid out. You did a brilliant job of emulating south park and transformers. The jokes were funny, and it's great that you're backing your animation with not-so-subliminal messages. Good job. 10/10. 5/5. I don't have any suggestions for improvement, except perhaps that after the south park short, it goes back to the menu instead of flowing straight into the transformers short.

Cheers.

WB

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Score: 4

"Nice idea"

submission: Sand

date: February 4, 2008

The execution of the idea could have been better, though.
It's too short to develop much interesting happenings. The FBF drawing could be better, it needs to have more artistic flare, if you know what I mean. It'd be great if you could animate the wave FBF, to give it a more fluent and natural motion, although I imagine it would be tricky to pull that off well, the wave, as you have it now requires a more natural edge to it, it doesn't really flow like a wave should. I did like the concept, it's interesting, kind of reminds me of the "Pass my flash" collab. I think if you could get that sort of vibe with the animation, it'd be more appealing.
Nice start, I'd like to see this idea developed further, though.

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Score: 7

"Pretty funny"

submission: BlueHippo's a BBS mod! :0

date: February 4, 2008

Lol @ ban message. So you got yourself banned, got your ban lifted and got BlueHippo to voice act, just so you could make a joke about your head exploding and the possibility of a de-modding... nice. Although it is entertaining, it's short and quite crude (animation-wise) so if you keep this style up, you'll entertain me, but you probably won't get a 10 from me. But that's not a bad thing.
Nice setup.

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