Score: 7

"Nice idea, lacking presentation"

submission: Short Term Memory Test

date: February 19, 2008

If you can present it in a slick and neat way, this game would have a lot more appeal. The buttons for the music are pretty ugly, the background is plain, the timer could be more appealing with a bit more depth. Nice programming though, you did a decent job with that. If you can work in some textures and gradients that add depth to the background, present the numbers and text box and everything in an organised and cool way, this could do pretty well, although it doesn't have much in terms of replay value and entertainment, if you could make it a little more innovative and unique, then it'd certainly be fun to play.

I got 9 digits.

Good job

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Score: 9

"Awesome"

submission: Fat, bald soccer player

date: February 19, 2008

The style and animation is funky fresh. Funny, groovy, great to watch. However, the FBF is very basic, and it'll look much more slick if you can fill out those frames and make it more smooth and less static. Nice music too.

Great work, very enjoyable.

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Score: 9

"Pretty funny"

submission: The Narrator's Love Story

date: February 19, 2008

Pretty decent graphics, the light on the screen was a little weird how he was behind it, but the plot was pretty good, amusing, voice acting was decent. I could see a lot of effort went into this, and it came out at quite a decent quality. Good job.

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Score: 8

"Truckin' funny"

submission: Happy Censorship Day!

date: February 19, 2008

Nice idea. *recommends for censorship day collection*
I was expecting a lot of bleeping, but this idea was better. Clever. I don't know where the "mild audio, mild text" fits in, there was none!

Good job. Entertaining.

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Score: 7

"Pretty decent"

submission: Alert! Monsters At 5:23!

date: February 19, 2008

Animation style is good, it could have been a bit smoother, but it was fun to watch. Easter egg was random, not bad, but the actual movie was better.

With a bit more practice, I'm sure your skills will become more tidy and better to watch.
Nice movie, certainly interesting. O.o
Good job.

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Score: 7

"Nice concept"

submission: Cow in Submarine

date: February 19, 2008

Graphics aren't too bad, although I think background detail was lacking. It didn't look too "underwater-like", could have put in some coral, shells, fish, maybe a crab walking along the bottom. Maybe tint the layers blue to give a bit more depth, add a shipwreck, diver, or treasure chest or something like that to really bring the location to life. As for the submarine, it looked pretty cool, but the tweening looked a little weird and maybe it could have had bubbles coming out of the back to indicate forward thrust. Also, the submarine sank awfully fast for an object underwater. I think if you can capture the location, touch up on the movements and give the physics a bit more of a life like quality, then you'll have a very nice animation. But right now, it's quite enjoyable enough, the cartoon style is cool, and the cows were amusing. Good job.
Keep it up.

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Score: 10

"Seriously"

submission: TheMostBeautifulDrawings

date: February 15, 2008

That was incredibly amusing. The drawings were so bad. You did a good job making fun of them.
Your art and animation was good. Kind of teacher-like, pointing out grammar and missing legs in red. Very funny, very enjoyable. Makes for a good laugh.

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Score: 8

"Funneh"

submission: Stan and Joe:"Valentine?"

date: February 13, 2008

It's very short, but the joke is pretty good. Nice work. I'll recommend it for the valentines collection.

WB

<3

Score: 8

"Nice appearance"

submission: Mouse Avoider #30

date: February 10, 2008

One of the better mouse avoiders in terms of appearance. It's tough, which is good. But I think you need to add something extra to this that sets it apart from the other games like this. I like playing games that have a uniqueness about them. It'd be cool if you had something in this game that made it more interesting. Maybe have the leves as unlockables, and maybe integrate a bit of a puzzle theme into it. I don't know, just diversify it. Maybe also, you could make the levels less dark, the black gets a bit much after a while, and maybe have different backgrounds to choose from. If you can manage to package it right, you'll have a game that people will want to play through a few times. But as it is now, it shows that you've mastered the basic mouse avoider. Move onwards and upwards.

Good job.

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Score: 6

"It's nothing spectacular"

submission: Droids Vs Aliens

date: February 7, 2008

But it's decent. The camera quality was poor though. A clearer image would make this a lot better. Also, maybe work for a longer movie with a bit more of a plot, it just looked like a random skirmish with lego characters...

But it's stop motion, so you automatically get extra points for that. Nice try.

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