Score: 3

"Graphics need to improve"

submission: Godzillas Depression

date: February 3, 2008

Yeah, the combination of sprite/hand drawn does make godzilla look very weird. You should definitely stick to one style throughout the flash. The FBF type stuff is done pretty average. You should try doing a lot more tweening, create symbols for each moving part you have. That way, the movement will be a lot more smooth and everything will be neat and organised. The buildings didn't look good at all. You should probably make them straight and give them a bit of depth, maybe try drawing buildings based on pictures of real buildings. Also, if you have a microphone, it'd be nice to get some voice acting into this, it's quite plain with the speech bubbles. If you don't have a microphone, if you improve your animating standards you could maybe get a voice actor to work with you.
The plot could've been worse, but it wasn't great. I mean, godzilla attempting suicide because some guy said that he's got no genitals? And the gun, it's all quite random. If you work on that, a more fluent plot, better graphics, I think you'd do okay.
Not bad but you've still got a way to go. Hope I helped.

-Review request club-

Score: 7

"Nothing unusual thar!"

submission: Inside the mind of SBC

date: January 31, 2008

Although I couldn't help but notice a severe lack of melting clocks. And you probably could have added a couple of sundials here and there.
But on the whole, I think you touched on some pretty interesting materials.
Can you do my mind next?
Do me! Do me! Do me!
Wait, that comes out wrong...
Oh, what the heck, do me anyway =P

It's a nice abstract animation.

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: Turf war

date: January 31, 2008

Graphics and gravity was really good. I like the worms type setup. That's great. Although a destructable landscape and/or more weapons would be nice. It's a good fun game, a little slow, but it's decent. I spent quite a while on this, the weapons didn't inflict all that much damage... But it was an entertaining game.

Score: 8

"It's pretty good"

submission: Stan and Joe Shorts 1

date: January 31, 2008

Although I find their lack of arms for the most part, disturbing. You should change that when you do the series. The humour wasn't bad, although I think it'll be good in the context of a full script. Overall, the graphics were pretty decent, voice acting was fairly good, it's an enjoyable movie.

Nice work.

Score: 10

"<3 style"

submission: A piece of puke

date: January 30, 2008

The style is great. The animation had a kind of Dan Paladin style about it. It was funny, it was random. It was very random.
I think that if you can come up with a good plot with some substance, and keep up the humour you used here, that and your smooth funky animation style, you could snag yourself an award or 2.

10/10 because it's just so slick, and the animation is top notch, and it made me laugh. Even though I think you need to make it longer, extend a plot out, but keep the randomness.

-Review Request Club-

Score: 5

"Weird..."

submission: Pot Head Bob and a gennie

date: January 30, 2008

I didn't find the joke all that funny, it was very random, but not in a "lolwtf" way, just a "wtf" way. The graphics were quite basic, but I agree with NintendoMadness about the south park style heads, I liked that. I thought the concept of the genie coming out of the bong was funny, but I think the direction from there was just... not... that good. So, improvements on plot and graphics, give the plot some length, or else, make sure so have a very good punchline for your main joke.

Keep at it, it wasn't too bad.

-Review Request Club-

Score: 7

"Heh, not bad."

submission: News Reporter III

date: January 30, 2008

My first impressions were that the graphics and animation were quite poor. And I still think that they could use a lot of improvement, the arms on the news reader were just rectangles, for instance, and the lip syncing was... non-existent. He moved his mouth. BUT- despite of that, the voice acting added a lot to the flash, in that it has an amateurish style, that works with your dodgy animation, so I'm thinking it was all purposely done to appear that way. I think that the script was pretty funny, I liked how you broke the fourth wall and talked about how it was just an animation and the characters come back to life next episode. It's simple, it's funny, it's not outstanding, but it's an enjoyable piece of work.
Good job. Made me chuckle.

-Review Request Club-

Score: 7

"Alright"

submission: The Fairy Future Mother

date: January 30, 2008

The plot was pretty funny, voice acting was good. Graphics had effort put into them, but there's room for improvement there. I think that your art style could be better, but you did pretty decent with what you've got. I think you've got a fair amount of promise for the future. With a bit of practice, the cartoons will look better, but everything else was really enjoyable.
So, good work, and good luck with your future projects.

WB

-Review Request Club-

Score: 8

"It's not bad"

submission: CandyHolics

date: January 30, 2008

Good parts:
Script is pretty good, it's not hilarious, but it's funny.
Graphics are somewhat decent, although a little basic, still, good.
Voice acting was also pretty good.
The reference to newgrounds related characters was great, sort of like an inside joke... I can't see too many people going trick or treating as steve IRL, so that just makes the joke a bit over-the top. I liked that.
Bad parts:
The audio was a bit fuzzy at times, so it could have been a lot cleaner.
Jokes could have been funnier, they weren't very subtle, so there's some room for improvement there, but it's better than most.
Graphics are passable, but there is definite room for improvement, the animation isn't quite the slick, smooth animation you see in tankmen or other well animated cartoons, but it's not too far off.
Overall:
It's a very decent flash, it's not amazing, but it's definitely something to be proud of.
Good job.

WB

-Review Request Club-

Score: 9

"This is a cool game"

submission: Snowflakes!

date: December 20, 2007

I've got a little bit of a lag with my mouse, so that makes things a little more difficult, but from level 2, it provides a great challenge.
I wouldn't mind maybe having a keyboard controlled version, with requirements changed accordingly, as some people prefer keyboard controls to the mouse.
Good job, and thanks for using my audio! XD