Score: 5

"Weird..."

submission: Pot Head Bob and a gennie

date: January 30, 2008

I didn't find the joke all that funny, it was very random, but not in a "lolwtf" way, just a "wtf" way. The graphics were quite basic, but I agree with NintendoMadness about the south park style heads, I liked that. I thought the concept of the genie coming out of the bong was funny, but I think the direction from there was just... not... that good. So, improvements on plot and graphics, give the plot some length, or else, make sure so have a very good punchline for your main joke.

Keep at it, it wasn't too bad.

-Review Request Club-

Score: 7

"Heh, not bad."

submission: News Reporter III

date: January 30, 2008

My first impressions were that the graphics and animation were quite poor. And I still think that they could use a lot of improvement, the arms on the news reader were just rectangles, for instance, and the lip syncing was... non-existent. He moved his mouth. BUT- despite of that, the voice acting added a lot to the flash, in that it has an amateurish style, that works with your dodgy animation, so I'm thinking it was all purposely done to appear that way. I think that the script was pretty funny, I liked how you broke the fourth wall and talked about how it was just an animation and the characters come back to life next episode. It's simple, it's funny, it's not outstanding, but it's an enjoyable piece of work.
Good job. Made me chuckle.

-Review Request Club-

Score: 7

"Alright"

submission: The Fairy Future Mother

date: January 30, 2008

The plot was pretty funny, voice acting was good. Graphics had effort put into them, but there's room for improvement there. I think that your art style could be better, but you did pretty decent with what you've got. I think you've got a fair amount of promise for the future. With a bit of practice, the cartoons will look better, but everything else was really enjoyable.
So, good work, and good luck with your future projects.

WB

-Review Request Club-

Score: 8

"It's not bad"

submission: CandyHolics

date: January 30, 2008

Good parts:
Script is pretty good, it's not hilarious, but it's funny.
Graphics are somewhat decent, although a little basic, still, good.
Voice acting was also pretty good.
The reference to newgrounds related characters was great, sort of like an inside joke... I can't see too many people going trick or treating as steve IRL, so that just makes the joke a bit over-the top. I liked that.
Bad parts:
The audio was a bit fuzzy at times, so it could have been a lot cleaner.
Jokes could have been funnier, they weren't very subtle, so there's some room for improvement there, but it's better than most.
Graphics are passable, but there is definite room for improvement, the animation isn't quite the slick, smooth animation you see in tankmen or other well animated cartoons, but it's not too far off.
Overall:
It's a very decent flash, it's not amazing, but it's definitely something to be proud of.
Good job.

WB

-Review Request Club-

Score: 9

"This is a cool game"

submission: Snowflakes!

date: December 20, 2007

I've got a little bit of a lag with my mouse, so that makes things a little more difficult, but from level 2, it provides a great challenge.
I wouldn't mind maybe having a keyboard controlled version, with requirements changed accordingly, as some people prefer keyboard controls to the mouse.
Good job, and thanks for using my audio! XD

Score: 10

"lol"

submission: Gamer Tonight - FPS Gamer

date: November 16, 2007

so true
Art style reminds me of Family Guy.
Good job. I thought it was really good.

Score: 10

"Lol"

submission: Weebl and Bob : Cube

date: November 12, 2007

Simple, but funny. I like the reference of the portal game. Fifen'd it.

Score: 7

"Preety nice"

submission: Born To Rock!

date: November 11, 2007

But the hands are different sizes and it'd be a bit more awesome if they looked a bit more believable. Maybe add a bit more variance as to what's going on on the screen, there's just two guys playing guitar in front of some basic backgrounds. I gave it 3/5.

Nice work.

Score: 10

"Moar plz!"

submission: The Spirit of Halloween 2

date: October 31, 2007

Excellent stuff. I'll definitely check out the first one for sure. Your art is awesome, the plot was great, you had it all down perfectly.
Excellent. It deserves nothing less than a 5/5 and 10/10. I'm adding it to my fav's list.

Score: 9

"Haha, cool"

submission: ZOMBOY

date: October 21, 2007

It was a little slow, as in plot... but it was well animated, good sound. You probably could have done a bit more with the plot, but it was still great.
Nice work man, keep it up!