Score: 10

"lol"

submission: Gamer Tonight - FPS Gamer

date: November 16, 2007

so true
Art style reminds me of Family Guy.
Good job. I thought it was really good.

Score: 10

"Lol"

submission: Weebl and Bob : Cube

date: November 12, 2007

Simple, but funny. I like the reference of the portal game. Fifen'd it.

Score: 7

"Preety nice"

submission: Born To Rock!

date: November 11, 2007

But the hands are different sizes and it'd be a bit more awesome if they looked a bit more believable. Maybe add a bit more variance as to what's going on on the screen, there's just two guys playing guitar in front of some basic backgrounds. I gave it 3/5.

Nice work.

Score: 10

"Moar plz!"

submission: The Spirit of Halloween 2

date: October 31, 2007

Excellent stuff. I'll definitely check out the first one for sure. Your art is awesome, the plot was great, you had it all down perfectly.
Excellent. It deserves nothing less than a 5/5 and 10/10. I'm adding it to my fav's list.

Score: 9

"Haha, cool"

submission: ZOMBOY

date: October 21, 2007

It was a little slow, as in plot... but it was well animated, good sound. You probably could have done a bit more with the plot, but it was still great.
Nice work man, keep it up!

Score: 7

"Lol @ video game references"

submission: AL in Space

date: October 9, 2007

Mario vs. Browser. Nice humour, a little confusing as to where it was going, it was all over the place, I dunno where "Al in Space" comes into it, he was just a random character... next time could you make the plot carry on a bit better please?
7/10 for humour.

Score: 7

"This is nice"

submission: Since You Been Gone

date: October 9, 2007

It all flowed together well and it looked very well done. As you pointed out yourself, maybe add some colour to your next flash. And you must have a preloader, otherwise it might stop and start in the middle of the movie (like it did with me).
Otherwise, well done, I look forward to more flashes of this skill level in the future.

Score: 7

"Not bad..."

submission: Animax Math Quiz

date: October 7, 2007

Some questions got a little bit tricky towards the end, although nothing terribly hard. The last question was waaaaay too simple, it was easier than the previous ones. You should step it up a notch, with harder algebraic questions.

Nice game (should put it down as a game, not a movie...)

Score: 0

"Honestly..."

submission: Tweening Tut.

date: October 5, 2007

That was terrible. A tutorail is something that is meant to have a neat presentation and an organisation of useful information, which is meant to impress the person who knows nothing of flash. People should be able to look at it and say "wow, I wish that I could animate like that" which makes them WANT to watch the rest of the tutorial. This... hmm, you edited the NG preloader to look much worse than it started with, you should have left that as it was. The coloured movieclips in the corners, they looked really messy, at least could you have refrained from moving them around. Then the tutorial taught me how to draw three completely different poses of a STICK FIGURE and link them together to make a movie clip that looks nothing like walking. Then you show the very basic art of TWEENING. Click the timeline, "insert motion tween". There are so many tutorials that show how to tween, and then go further on to more useful information. And as for the walking stick, anyone can do it like that, you should learn how to make it look decent before you tell people to copy you. The last thing the flash portal needs is more noobs uploading poor stick flashes. Please, PLEASE, brush up on your flash skills before trying to teach others flash.
Beginners would find a lot more help in a proffesionally made tutorial.
Sorry to sound harsh, but this is just terrible.

Score: 8

"Hey nice tut."

submission: TheExtreme Stick Tutorial

date: September 30, 2007

I'm just starting to get into FB animation. There was one thing in the animation that confused me... the v-cam thing, it looks very useful, bit I haven't a clue as to how to apply it to my own flashes. I'd feel like I was ripping you off if I just copied it across, can you explain/link to somewhere that goes into more depth on this camera technique. Much appreciated.
Cheers.

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