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homemade film. It's not hollywood, but the camerawork and script was pretty well executed. Maybe some lighting issues here and there, I'm going to guess that the sound was the quality it was because of the overall film's quality being reduced a bit. I thought the ending was, for the most part, decent, but the dancing around felt a bit out of place. Great use of humour, I think you guys did a decent job. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. We did a couple of shots of the ending, but it just seemed to be the only one that went with the movie. I really don't know what else would have fit there though.
Perhaps we should invest in some mics to make the sound better. That's the only thing that is really missing from our movies now.
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The illustrations were wonderful, the voicework was brilliant, and the story, impeccable. Congratulations on making a success out of your storybook collab. Only thing to note is that the text is a little hard to read. This would have been a much bigger problem if the voices weren't as clear as they were.
Author's Response:
I've seen your works in the Storybook Collab; you're very poetic and literate, so this kind of reception is truly wonderful. Thank you for checking this out and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!
The text issue has been fixed; enjoy!
I very much look forward to seeing you deliver something for the Collab yourself; I hope to see you on here soon doing similiar business!
Cheers, and best of luck to you in your own ventures!
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Lol quoted me. :3
A classic Lochie humourous short. Ahh, the style of old film and lochie ^___^ meld together unexpectedly well. I laughed, I 5'd, I give you a pat on the back, my fine sir.
I'm now "leet". Care to go for a joyride in my ROFLcopter?
<3
Author's Response:
I'd love to go for a joyride in your ROFLcopter. <3
THanks for the 5'n'10. <3
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I think it's great how they continue at it at the end, even though there's plenty more apples to go round.
I was wondering, how would the guy with the paper bag eat an apple anyway, without removing his paper bag? I saw no mouth on that character! And the one that was all mouth and no body, how did he manage NOT to eat it?
Simple storylline, elegant and well executed. Music was great. An all around class act. *thumbs up*
Author's Response:
That's a good question!
They didn't wan't to eat the apple anyway, they just wanted to fight over it. :)
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it was good.
Fun. Nice. Random.
Perfect for people like me with a short attention span.
Maybe if you added something shiny in there... or a red ball...
Oh, and you spelled "End" wrong, that was the part at the end of the movie, you spelled it "edn". Might want to fix that.
I'll be waiting for your return from Bel Air, so that you can make more awesome flash movies.
=D
Author's Response:
A red ball would have fitten perfectly, I don't know why I didn't put that in! D:
I'll be back from Bel Air soon.
Thanks! :D
/edn reply.
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Great story. It kept me entertained for the whole time, good job. Despite the lack of lip synching and other numerous cuts in animation quality ;D it shows a fair amount of effort put into telling the story.
The best animation I've seen from you yet.
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Author's Response:
"The best animation I've seen from you yet."
I would say some of the best, but I'm not sure about THE best. :)
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Ok, you create a flash to complain about these flashes, you really could make an improvement from that, underachievement is nothing to be proud of. I doubt it took 7 of you to make that flash, so, raise your standards a bit, if you've got something to say, you don't have to make a flash about it. I think you're all just making this flash for the attention. I find it disappointing how flashes like this can pass because of the +1 protect point voters...
Try to get an actual plot and character development next time you make a flash, and maybe then you'll get some respected attention.
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Author's Response:
Sure I'll improve.
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I give it a 10.
I'm Simon, who's from space.
And we're both on 43 except for Julie who's behind on 67.
I prefer the show, but it's not a bad idea, gotta work on making it entertaining enough to appeal to those who don't get the reference, and maybe add more to it, so that it's less boring, it's not as fast paced as the actual show, so you've got to compensate for that.
Imaginary nimbers: Shifty-six.
Ohh... I'm afraid shifty-six is a real number...
=D
Author's Response:
If I may become a smidge esoteric for a second, I like to think that the whole point is that people don't get the game. If you get the game, then you have a slight advantage. And isn't the home game of game shows always slower than the real bit? :-P I'm sorry, I must have nodded off. I think you got Wangernumb a while ago. Did you say 6?
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It ends kind of abruptly, and it leaves me thinking "what will he do with a rocket launcher?" Nice birthday present, and a funny animation.
Graphics could be improved and the volume of the voice acting could be quieter, but overall, it was amusing, your animations are a lot different to the average flash, in terms of style.
Good work.
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Author's Response:
Andersson/Satan would do several things with a rocket launcher. :)
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It seems a little slow in conversation, I think that was dragged out a bit too much, but the art and animation was really great and the voice acting was pretty solid too. The ending was funny and a bit unexpected, it was done well.
Good work.
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Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
I agree with you (and many others) stating that the conversation was too slow throughout the animation. This was my first attempt at comedy, and I have learned now that proper timing is vital to keep people's attention and to get the joke across. It will be a little while before I attempt another comedy.
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