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I think it's great how they continue at it at the end, even though there's plenty more apples to go round.
I was wondering, how would the guy with the paper bag eat an apple anyway, without removing his paper bag? I saw no mouth on that character! And the one that was all mouth and no body, how did he manage NOT to eat it?
Simple storylline, elegant and well executed. Music was great. An all around class act. *thumbs up*
Author's Response:
That's a good question!
They didn't wan't to eat the apple anyway, they just wanted to fight over it. :)
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it was good.
Fun. Nice. Random.
Perfect for people like me with a short attention span.
Maybe if you added something shiny in there... or a red ball...
Oh, and you spelled "End" wrong, that was the part at the end of the movie, you spelled it "edn". Might want to fix that.
I'll be waiting for your return from Bel Air, so that you can make more awesome flash movies.
=D
Author's Response:
A red ball would have fitten perfectly, I don't know why I didn't put that in! D:
I'll be back from Bel Air soon.
Thanks! :D
/edn reply.
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Great story. It kept me entertained for the whole time, good job. Despite the lack of lip synching and other numerous cuts in animation quality ;D it shows a fair amount of effort put into telling the story.
The best animation I've seen from you yet.
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Author's Response:
"The best animation I've seen from you yet."
I would say some of the best, but I'm not sure about THE best. :)
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Ok, you create a flash to complain about these flashes, you really could make an improvement from that, underachievement is nothing to be proud of. I doubt it took 7 of you to make that flash, so, raise your standards a bit, if you've got something to say, you don't have to make a flash about it. I think you're all just making this flash for the attention. I find it disappointing how flashes like this can pass because of the +1 protect point voters...
Try to get an actual plot and character development next time you make a flash, and maybe then you'll get some respected attention.
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Author's Response:
Sure I'll improve.
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I give it a 10.
I'm Simon, who's from space.
And we're both on 43 except for Julie who's behind on 67.
I prefer the show, but it's not a bad idea, gotta work on making it entertaining enough to appeal to those who don't get the reference, and maybe add more to it, so that it's less boring, it's not as fast paced as the actual show, so you've got to compensate for that.
Imaginary nimbers: Shifty-six.
Ohh... I'm afraid shifty-six is a real number...
=D
Author's Response:
If I may become a smidge esoteric for a second, I like to think that the whole point is that people don't get the game. If you get the game, then you have a slight advantage. And isn't the home game of game shows always slower than the real bit? :-P I'm sorry, I must have nodded off. I think you got Wangernumb a while ago. Did you say 6?
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It ends kind of abruptly, and it leaves me thinking "what will he do with a rocket launcher?" Nice birthday present, and a funny animation.
Graphics could be improved and the volume of the voice acting could be quieter, but overall, it was amusing, your animations are a lot different to the average flash, in terms of style.
Good work.
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Author's Response:
Andersson/Satan would do several things with a rocket launcher. :)
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It seems a little slow in conversation, I think that was dragged out a bit too much, but the art and animation was really great and the voice acting was pretty solid too. The ending was funny and a bit unexpected, it was done well.
Good work.
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Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
I agree with you (and many others) stating that the conversation was too slow throughout the animation. This was my first attempt at comedy, and I have learned now that proper timing is vital to keep people's attention and to get the joke across. It will be a little while before I attempt another comedy.
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I don't really get the connection between the plot and the title, I think the music is a little qirky for someone committing suicide (?)
But the drawing was done well, animation could have been a bit smoother, but overall, it's a good little flash. Not too much to comment on, due to length, but it definitely showcases your ability, so it's a great start to build from, and it's a good sign for things to come.
Keep at it.
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Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Wouldn't it be funny if she jumped from a love blimp?
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The way I see it, this type of flash is not very hard to create. Anyone who can search the pictures can make a quiz like this. Although the video is an original addition, but I don't really find this sort of thing worth a high vote/good review, because the video and pictures are created by other people, you just added the quiz to it. I'm a Family Guy fan, so I found the questions really easy, but even if you're not a Family Guy fan, you don't even need to look up the answers to get the answer, because of the wrong answer, go back one question, you can just guess. I think this is a bad thing. It takes away the element of challenge to the game. Also, as a Family Guy fan, I found that the answers wouldn't be too hard for someone that doesn't really watch the show, so it's kind of just like handing out the pictures, with no real challenge, it's not really rewarding. If you make the questions more challenging, maybe have a checkpoint or rounds system, give it more of a Family Guy theme, incorporate more of your original style into it (maybe draw the family guy characters to stand beside each question, to brighten it up a bit) because as it is, I can't decide whether you have talent at flash or not. I also thought that the arrows, and the hand drawn "Last question" text were very messy, and lowered the starnard of the flash a bit.
Overall, it's not bad, but certainly could use some original flair, to make it stand out from other flashes like this. I know I probably sound like a big jerk, but I think that you could do better if you make it more unique. For the most part the layout was very sleek.
Good luck with future projects, sorry to sound so harsh, I probably should have pointed out some more good things...
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Author's Response:
thanks I'll keep it in mind.
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The sprites are done well, but this lacks a good plot and originality. The sprites appear to just do the same as the original game, they don't have anything special to set them apart from the original game, especially since the plot is just a couple of fights. If you make a decent story out of it, work some more creative moves in there and this movie will be a lot better. Definitely not bad, though.
Keep it up!
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Author's Response:
Plot is taken directly from the game... I am just doing it by altering it slightly.
Well the point of this animation is to emulate what the game was with a bit of pizazz and that's what the glow effects and such are doing.
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