WritersBlock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Halloweenator]

Nice

It seems a little slow in conversation, I think that was dragged out a bit too much, but the art and animation was really great and the voice acting was pretty solid too. The ending was funny and a bit unexpected, it was done well.

Good work.

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thanks for the review.
I agree with you (and many others) stating that the conversation was too slow throughout the animation. This was my first attempt at comedy, and I have learned now that proper timing is vital to keep people's attention and to get the joke across. It will be a little while before I attempt another comedy.

[Love You]

Plot = weird

I don't really get the connection between the plot and the title, I think the music is a little qirky for someone committing suicide (?)
But the drawing was done well, animation could have been a bit smoother, but overall, it's a good little flash. Not too much to comment on, due to length, but it definitely showcases your ability, so it's a great start to build from, and it's a good sign for things to come.
Keep at it.

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thanks for the review.
Wouldn't it be funny if she jumped from a love blimp?

[Shorts To Wear Pants To]

Funny

This was really well done. For a collab that was open to anyone, all the parts were really good, I had a great time watching it, it looked like a blast to make. The layout and presentation of the collab was really slick (the intro THX [that sound company] parody was really funny). Great job on a successful collab. Gets my 5.
=D

[Machina Humana]

Great

The greaphics are really good, for the most part, it's a high quality, slick, entertaining animation. The plot is good, it flows with the music really well, and it's really interesting to watch. The flickering light was done really well, and it's awesome to see a bit of 3D type animation in there (rotation of walls/shading, etc...) so overall, it's a very good flash. I'd like to see what you'd do if you broke away from the vague plotline flowing with the music and came up with characters and a script and made a proper conventional movie.

Great work.

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MrGUS responds:

Thank you, I do need to change a bit in style, explore other stuff... not on my next one though, the next one is another song based animation. But I an thinking about making something more along the lines of a normal story with plot etc... it would probably not have voices though.. I-m not into using voice acting, or maybe I could... I'll just finish what I'm working on right now... which will take a while and then I'll use your suggestion.

Thanks for the review,

Gustavo M.

[A Shot to Remember]

Great preloader

Animation is pretty good, but a little too messy. I liked your other one more, how it was a lot neater, this one could use some more backgrounds though. The concept was real nice, I really like the part where she's in black and white, holding her fingers like a gun and the transformation there is slick. Good work, could be tidier, but all round, it's decent.

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MrGUS responds:

Yeah it is quite messier, and I would like to say that it's on pourpose... but not really , I had a bit less experience and that bit of messyness is caused by that.. luckily it has a more forgiving atmosphere for that.. and yeah I realize I have some "plain background" fetish or something.

Thanks for the review,

Gustavo M.

[I Am One]

Nice graphics

It was really well animated. Great job there. It was very entertaining, also. I think it would be cool if there was a background where the stuffed bear was, but other than that, it was smooth, it was a little twisted, it was great to watch. Nice work.

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MrGUS responds:

Thanks alot "great to watch" I love that reaction from one of my movies, I like this particular animation ,there is something about it that subconsciously makes me a bit happy... maybe something good happened while I was making it... anyways

Thanks for the review,

Gustavo M.

[Joe N Stan: Tripped Out]

lol

That was weird. Nice style. The voice acting and pauses after each line, they were really good. Very funny. Definitely weird, funny. You have nice hair.

Good job!

[Tangerine Madness!]

Funny

Good parts-
The stream of orange was done well, as well as when he wipes it out of his eyes. The ending is good, graphically and plot-wise.

Bad parts-
The character design is very simple and the background and landscape detail is lacking. Also, at the end, I was just waiting for a "squish" sound effect.

Overall-
Pretty good, but detail and character requires more work. Plot was decent, amusing.
Good job.

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MinusNick responds:

Thanks for your review! In the future I'm paying way more attention to sounds and details. I'm glad you liked it.

[Chaos Sonic chp 2 Trailer]

Awesome

Action looks like a huge step up from part 1 (now that the plot has been set). Script please! I'd really like to get started on making some music for CH 2. Maybe I could do something for the movie and put it in the BVG as a bit of an extra showcase for the movie?
Can't wait. Good work.

knuxrouge responds:

Great Idea, go ahead and do that.
Check you email.
Thanks.

[Fat, bald soccer player]

Awesome

The style and animation is funky fresh. Funny, groovy, great to watch. However, the FBF is very basic, and it'll look much more slick if you can fill out those frames and make it more smooth and less static. Nice music too.

Great work, very enjoyable.

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Pepeto responds:

Yep, i really should've done that.
Thanks :>