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[A Shot to Remember]

Great preloader

Animation is pretty good, but a little too messy. I liked your other one more, how it was a lot neater, this one could use some more backgrounds though. The concept was real nice, I really like the part where she's in black and white, holding her fingers like a gun and the transformation there is slick. Good work, could be tidier, but all round, it's decent.

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MrGUS responds:

Yeah it is quite messier, and I would like to say that it's on pourpose... but not really , I had a bit less experience and that bit of messyness is caused by that.. luckily it has a more forgiving atmosphere for that.. and yeah I realize I have some "plain background" fetish or something.

Thanks for the review,

Gustavo M.

[I Am One]

Nice graphics

It was really well animated. Great job there. It was very entertaining, also. I think it would be cool if there was a background where the stuffed bear was, but other than that, it was smooth, it was a little twisted, it was great to watch. Nice work.

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MrGUS responds:

Thanks alot "great to watch" I love that reaction from one of my movies, I like this particular animation ,there is something about it that subconsciously makes me a bit happy... maybe something good happened while I was making it... anyways

Thanks for the review,

Gustavo M.

[Tangerine Madness!]

Funny

Good parts-
The stream of orange was done well, as well as when he wipes it out of his eyes. The ending is good, graphically and plot-wise.

Bad parts-
The character design is very simple and the background and landscape detail is lacking. Also, at the end, I was just waiting for a "squish" sound effect.

Overall-
Pretty good, but detail and character requires more work. Plot was decent, amusing.
Good job.

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MinusNick responds:

Thanks for your review! In the future I'm paying way more attention to sounds and details. I'm glad you liked it.

[Chaos Sonic chp 2 Trailer]

Awesome

Action looks like a huge step up from part 1 (now that the plot has been set). Script please! I'd really like to get started on making some music for CH 2. Maybe I could do something for the movie and put it in the BVG as a bit of an extra showcase for the movie?
Can't wait. Good work.

knuxrouge responds:

Great Idea, go ahead and do that.
Check you email.
Thanks.

[Fat, bald soccer player]

Awesome

The style and animation is funky fresh. Funny, groovy, great to watch. However, the FBF is very basic, and it'll look much more slick if you can fill out those frames and make it more smooth and less static. Nice music too.

Great work, very enjoyable.

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Pepeto responds:

Yep, i really should've done that.
Thanks :>

[The Narrator's Love Story]

Pretty funny

Pretty decent graphics, the light on the screen was a little weird how he was behind it, but the plot was pretty good, amusing, voice acting was decent. I could see a lot of effort went into this, and it came out at quite a decent quality. Good job.

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, he was behind the light because I was giving the scene a projector feel and how the projector light is shining on him.

[Happy Censorship Day!]

Truckin' funny

Nice idea. *recommends for censorship day collection*
I was expecting a lot of bleeping, but this idea was better. Clever. I don't know where the "mild audio, mild text" fits in, there was none!

Good job. Entertaining.

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kinggila responds:

We'll just have to see what happens next year. Maybe Tom won't overlook Censorship Day next year and will make a collection. :)

[Alert! Monsters At 5:23!]

Pretty decent

Animation style is good, it could have been a bit smoother, but it was fun to watch. Easter egg was random, not bad, but the actual movie was better.

With a bit more practice, I'm sure your skills will become more tidy and better to watch.
Nice movie, certainly interesting. O.o
Good job.

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Ying-yong responds:

Interesting movies tend to be better than movies that aren't

[Cow in Submarine]

Nice concept

Graphics aren't too bad, although I think background detail was lacking. It didn't look too "underwater-like", could have put in some coral, shells, fish, maybe a crab walking along the bottom. Maybe tint the layers blue to give a bit more depth, add a shipwreck, diver, or treasure chest or something like that to really bring the location to life. As for the submarine, it looked pretty cool, but the tweening looked a little weird and maybe it could have had bubbles coming out of the back to indicate forward thrust. Also, the submarine sank awfully fast for an object underwater. I think if you can capture the location, touch up on the movements and give the physics a bit more of a life like quality, then you'll have a very nice animation. But right now, it's quite enjoyable enough, the cartoon style is cool, and the cows were amusing. Good job.
Keep it up.

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Imacow responds:

There was a shipwreck.

I was considering adding bubbles, but they came out weird.

Thanks for the review.

[TheMostBeautifulDrawings]

Seriously

That was incredibly amusing. The drawings were so bad. You did a good job making fun of them.
Your art and animation was good. Kind of teacher-like, pointing out grammar and missing legs in red. Very funny, very enjoyable. Makes for a good laugh.

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Graeme responds:

Glad you liked it. Glad to to see you also understand its all in good fun.
Some people think I was just being a dick, or that a made up captain-insano1