I can see a southerner from the US speaking this story but one problem is you used the "verandah"
it is more of an australian word
then after that it starts to sound more australian with the fish and chip shop and all
I found it interesting that at the beginning that he said that he spoke to people but never saying any words
then near the end he spoke
maybe one day I shall place a story here on my posts
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Most of the story is just painting a picture of his life and the last part is where he moves away from the monotonous lifestyle. So that's why he didn't really speak, he was stuck in an internal monologue.
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Congratz on audio mod!!!
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Thanks.
Wow, that's a beautifull story! Nice one!
Thanks, flip over to the next blog and there's one for Rucklo... :'(
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geez it has been nearly a day and whirlguy and rig has yet to say something
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Their natural enemy is the wall of text, lol. Nah, I'm sure they're out celebrating the success of the CTSG without me... *sigh* =P