wow..... dude..... AWESOME! and, good luck with the collab
I'm a writer.
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I really like how you incorporated a poetic style into these prose. It's a tricky thing really ... and it can be easily overdone, but you manage to skirt around poetic disfigurement and really, really write a story. From the second sentence on it is charged with a tightly wound spring of tension, which is never quite unsprung. Even the ending manages to leave the reader with the tightness in prose of unfinished business!
Thanks for taking the time to read it, I'm glad you like it. <3
Hey WB, do you have an artist yet for the storybook collab?
I would luuuuuurve to do art for your story.
But if you have one, that's cool too. I might not be here for a while after Christmas though, but if you don't have anyone yet, I'll put in 110%!
I've had an offer from an artist for one of my stories already (Butcher of Krankhafte), but I'd love it if you'd like to do some art for one of my other stories.
When'd you become a mod? :D
A few months ago. ;)
igott
Story! *Sits down on carpet.*
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If you wait for ReNaeNae's Storybook project to come out, this might be on it. Have it READ to you. Now THAT'S real genius.