Go, if you come up against a hurdle.
Fight, fight for the things you believe in.
Passion, Joy, Sorrow, pain and tears.
All they will be pabulum of your life.
Go, if you come under the wet yourself.
Fight, fight for the person you believe in.
Destiny is calling you...
"Obey me, or defy me"
I'm a writer.
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Comments
I really need to read more poetry. I need to read more in general...
what is a "spiel"?
http://dictionary.reference.com/b rowse/spiel
I think I have an idea
john westacott was the original grim
then it was grim
then lincoln
now it is dave
how far off am I?
ah!
I forgot sarah!
john westacott was the original grim
then it was sarah
then it was grim
then lincoln
now it is dave
how far off am I?
You've got it. That was essentially the plot I was going for, and I'm surprised that it actually came through better than I thought, especially since the last 3 chapters were written in such a short space of time.
it's not poetry, it's a song by some Japanese rock band
Here's the zinger; if you read my comment again, you'll find that I never mentioned anything about your song being a poem.
hey I got sometihng right!
woo!
my mind is like a bright beacon of light painted over in black :D
Ch 5 is the wind done chapter.
oh, sorry, I thought you were responding to me, I guess I was wrong
...
403 Forbiddena > many people
lol assumptions
Wow I never expected the story to take a turn like this. Very cool.
:)
Thank you.
Mizox
disturbing...
WritersBlock
Ch 5 is really short, and more resolving. I'll post it later.