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tigerkitty
I imagine, since this is a first draft that you'll be back to the editing blackboard after you get it all done. Be wary of changing tenses, I know that it's neat stylistically, but it can be confusing. I haven't gotten through it all, but it's an interesting piece of work, well done :)
WritersBlock
Yeah, I'll be editing through it the months after I finish. Then I hope to send it off to publishing companies to look through. If my edits are any good.