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Shane Cartledge @WritersBlock

Age 33, Male

Curtin Uni

Perth, Australia

Joined on 1/8/07

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I imagine, since this is a first draft that you'll be back to the editing blackboard after you get it all done. Be wary of changing tenses, I know that it's neat stylistically, but it can be confusing. I haven't gotten through it all, but it's an interesting piece of work, well done :)

Yeah, I'll be editing through it the months after I finish. Then I hope to send it off to publishing companies to look through. If my edits are any good.

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Should I read it piece-by-piece, or wait until its all done??

It's up to you, really. It's going to be 50,000 words when it's all done, so you'd get through it quicker going piece by piece. It all depends on how fast I work through it. I'm behind schedule at the moment, by about 8,000 words, so over the next few weeks I'll hopefully get a lot of writing done. Aiming to have chapter 2 done over the next few days.

Note to self to read at a later date. Hard at the moment with no home computer, but I'll make sure I read this in due course.

Hope it's going well.

Thanks Leanne. <3

Whoah, that's a huge read man. I'd rather read this when it's all finished but that may take a looong time :P It's sounding damn well awesome, and did you use songtitles for all of your chapters? Pretty original :3

It should hopefully be finished in the next 12 days.

And yeah they're all song titles. In order the bands are; Daft Punk, Radiohead, Incubus, Augie March, Muse, The Chemical Brothers, Pendulum, Does It Offend You, Yeah? and The Living End.

Is butterflies and Hurricanes named after the Muse song?

Just wondering.

Right now I've read up to chapter 1 part 4 and so far it's pretty interesting/

Yes it is.

And I'm glad you like it so far. Personally, I think it gets better the further you get into it. More action and some good (well I think it's good *bias*) character development. I hope you keep reading it. :3

I Promise, I will read it when it is 100% finished. Also, I will read it 100% better then gagsy will read it.

How are you going to get 100% better than reading it naked?