Score: 9

"8bit, or chiptune, as it is also known..."

submission: World's Bounty

date: February 23, 2008

is hard to make whilst still sounding good. Music in it's most basic form of waves. I like 8bit, but the thing is that since the technical arrangement of it is so simple, there's a very high importance on the composition. The composition here was quite pleasant, so I'll give you extra points there. I've done a bit of chiptune myself, although I've only managed to pull it off good once. But the thing is that now we're not limited by videogame sound systems, there's no restrictions as to what you can do with those square, triangle, sine and saw waves. I'd like to hear this song with a bit of effects on it. Delay, chorus, reverb, phaser, go nuts! So that it'll stand out that extra bit when compared to the old mario tunes. Good work. I liked it.

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Score: 6

"Needs work"

submission: Not so Simple

date: February 23, 2008

It's really hard to get a really good classical rock sound without guitars. First of all, there aren't too many people who know how to get FL slayer to sound like a real guitar, one just off the top of my head would be jrayteam6. I'd suggest trying to find some FL Slayer tutorials out there, using a real guitar, try finding a better guitar VSTi (I think I remember seeing one somewhere, a little while ago) or trying to work with different virtual instruments. A rock song usually sounds pretty simple, but most of the time a lot is going on. As well as the lead guitar, there's the rhythm guitar and a bass, and drums. If you want to reconstruct those instruments digitally, you need to have really good samples, and most of the time this costs a lot of money. You could probably get some good drums by using the FPC and using techniques and patterns that sound as if a real drummer would play them, and you can add realism to the drums by adding reverb. I think you can probably improve on this if you add a bass, maybe try and get something good in slayer or search around. You could probably get a passable rhythm guitar with FL slayer if you sue it right, but the lead is a bit of a problem, you could replace the lead with a violin sample or flute sample.
Also, there's the structure of your song, once you've got your base chord progression, you can vary the lead around that to get a few versus, connect them with a second progression for a chorus, add a third progression for variation as the bridge, intro, outro, wham, bam, you're done.
Hope this helps break it down for you.
Good luck composing music in the future.

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Score: 7

"I don't really like that vocal style"

submission: Slow Chemical (Kane's Theme)

date: February 23, 2008

It lacks melody. It lacks clarity, I didn't understand any of the lyrics. It was played pretty well, although compared to some of the other metalheads on newgrounds, it isn't anything spectacular, I think the guitar is over-distorted, even for the genre. The lead should be a lot clearer. It was pretty repetitve, it really could have used a thrashing solo, which usually livens up a metal song and vamps it up into kickass mode. But on the whole, I've got to give it to you for using a real instrument, it's much harder to perform the guitar perfectly than it is to make a digital recording. Keep it up, on the whole, it was decent.

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Score: 10

"Reminds me of"

submission: Electro Blues - Wayl0n

date: February 23, 2008

the game on newgrounds: Fancy Pants Adventure. It has a nice fun feel to it. Great loop, and great for your first. Welcome to the AP, this is very enjoyable, would probably work really well in a funky game. Great work.

10/10 and a 5/5 for encouragement.

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Score: 9

"This is cool, but"

submission: RGH: Kingdom Grunt

date: February 23, 2008

I don't really see someone rapping over this, it's great how it is, although it is a tad repetitive, it's missing the hip hop vibe. The synths are great, but a lot more electronica. Great song, I say leave it as it is. Good job.

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Score: 9

"Right from the start"

submission: RGH: Lets Play a Little Game

date: February 23, 2008

it gets my attention, it loops very well, the variation in the song is simple, but enough to make it the kind of loop that won't get old if used in a game.
The synths used were cool, they're effective, and the drums are great, short and punchy, it's mixed really well. I could listen to this over and over again for a while.
Great work.

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Score: 3

"Meh"

submission: Beat46

date: February 23, 2008

On it's own, it's not really much, but in the context of a song, it's decent, so, yeah, I'd prefer the drums to stay in the context of a proper track, although maybe it could be sampled by other people, in which it'd probably be better off hosted on a file sharing site and linked here. Nothing special. =/

Score: 7

"Nice danceable beat"

submission: 400D

date: February 23, 2008

Pretty cool tune, although it's a little short and simple. Sound effects fitted in pretty well. Could loop better but it's not bad. Also, it could use some more variation, extra instruments, longer sections, that sort of thing. But it's not bad, it's kind of nice.

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Score: 3

"A little too plain"

submission: etc0

date: February 23, 2008

Sounds pretty lazy to me. I don't understand why you'd want to make something as basic as this, when you've proven that you can already do some pretty cool songs with a lot more talent and effort.
More effort please!

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Score: 8

"Drums are cool"

submission: The Beet

date: February 23, 2008

It's a pretty neat song, but I agree with NintendoMadness about the rides. It's also pretty repetitive, which is all the more noticeable by the length of the song. If you add some more instruments in there, mix it up a bit more, make it a little longer, it'll be pretty solid. Good work.