WritersBlock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Halloweenator]

Nice

It seems a little slow in conversation, I think that was dragged out a bit too much, but the art and animation was really great and the voice acting was pretty solid too. The ending was funny and a bit unexpected, it was done well.

Good work.

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thanks for the review.
I agree with you (and many others) stating that the conversation was too slow throughout the animation. This was my first attempt at comedy, and I have learned now that proper timing is vital to keep people's attention and to get the joke across. It will be a little while before I attempt another comedy.

[Love You]

Plot = weird

I don't really get the connection between the plot and the title, I think the music is a little qirky for someone committing suicide (?)
But the drawing was done well, animation could have been a bit smoother, but overall, it's a good little flash. Not too much to comment on, due to length, but it definitely showcases your ability, so it's a great start to build from, and it's a good sign for things to come.
Keep at it.

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Lambinvoker responds:

Thanks for the review.
Wouldn't it be funny if she jumped from a love blimp?

[Shorts To Wear Pants To]

Funny

This was really well done. For a collab that was open to anyone, all the parts were really good, I had a great time watching it, it looked like a blast to make. The layout and presentation of the collab was really slick (the intro THX [that sound company] parody was really funny). Great job on a successful collab. Gets my 5.
=D

[Tangerine Madness!]

Funny

Good parts-
The stream of orange was done well, as well as when he wipes it out of his eyes. The ending is good, graphically and plot-wise.

Bad parts-
The character design is very simple and the background and landscape detail is lacking. Also, at the end, I was just waiting for a "squish" sound effect.

Overall-
Pretty good, but detail and character requires more work. Plot was decent, amusing.
Good job.

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MinusNick responds:

Thanks for your review! In the future I'm paying way more attention to sounds and details. I'm glad you liked it.

[Chaos Sonic chp 2 Trailer]

Awesome

Action looks like a huge step up from part 1 (now that the plot has been set). Script please! I'd really like to get started on making some music for CH 2. Maybe I could do something for the movie and put it in the BVG as a bit of an extra showcase for the movie?
Can't wait. Good work.

knuxrouge responds:

Great Idea, go ahead and do that.
Check you email.
Thanks.

[Fat, bald soccer player]

Awesome

The style and animation is funky fresh. Funny, groovy, great to watch. However, the FBF is very basic, and it'll look much more slick if you can fill out those frames and make it more smooth and less static. Nice music too.

Great work, very enjoyable.

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Pepeto responds:

Yep, i really should've done that.
Thanks :>