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[The Narrator's Love Story]

Pretty funny

Pretty decent graphics, the light on the screen was a little weird how he was behind it, but the plot was pretty good, amusing, voice acting was decent. I could see a lot of effort went into this, and it came out at quite a decent quality. Good job.

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, he was behind the light because I was giving the scene a projector feel and how the projector light is shining on him.

[Happy Censorship Day!]

Truckin' funny

Nice idea. *recommends for censorship day collection*
I was expecting a lot of bleeping, but this idea was better. Clever. I don't know where the "mild audio, mild text" fits in, there was none!

Good job. Entertaining.

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kinggila responds:

We'll just have to see what happens next year. Maybe Tom won't overlook Censorship Day next year and will make a collection. :)

[Alert! Monsters At 5:23!]

Pretty decent

Animation style is good, it could have been a bit smoother, but it was fun to watch. Easter egg was random, not bad, but the actual movie was better.

With a bit more practice, I'm sure your skills will become more tidy and better to watch.
Nice movie, certainly interesting. O.o
Good job.

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Ying-yong responds:

Interesting movies tend to be better than movies that aren't

[Cow in Submarine]

Nice concept

Graphics aren't too bad, although I think background detail was lacking. It didn't look too "underwater-like", could have put in some coral, shells, fish, maybe a crab walking along the bottom. Maybe tint the layers blue to give a bit more depth, add a shipwreck, diver, or treasure chest or something like that to really bring the location to life. As for the submarine, it looked pretty cool, but the tweening looked a little weird and maybe it could have had bubbles coming out of the back to indicate forward thrust. Also, the submarine sank awfully fast for an object underwater. I think if you can capture the location, touch up on the movements and give the physics a bit more of a life like quality, then you'll have a very nice animation. But right now, it's quite enjoyable enough, the cartoon style is cool, and the cows were amusing. Good job.
Keep it up.

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Imacow responds:

There was a shipwreck.

I was considering adding bubbles, but they came out weird.

Thanks for the review.

[TheMostBeautifulDrawings]

Seriously

That was incredibly amusing. The drawings were so bad. You did a good job making fun of them.
Your art and animation was good. Kind of teacher-like, pointing out grammar and missing legs in red. Very funny, very enjoyable. Makes for a good laugh.

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Graeme responds:

Glad you liked it. Glad to to see you also understand its all in good fun.
Some people think I was just being a dick, or that a made up captain-insano1

[Stan and Joe:"Valentine?"]

Funneh

It's very short, but the joke is pretty good. Nice work. I'll recommend it for the valentines collection.

WB

<3

[Droids Vs Aliens]

It's nothing spectacular

But it's decent. The camera quality was poor though. A clearer image would make this a lot better. Also, maybe work for a longer movie with a bit more of a plot, it just looked like a random skirmish with lego characters...

But it's stop motion, so you automatically get extra points for that. Nice try.

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Graeme responds:

If I had to re-do part of it, I would have made the camera on a better setting. Perhaps on a low light filter, that way the image would have been much brighter.

[Inward Singing]

This was a great flash

Graphics were great, theway you constructed the scene around the conversation. 1 isseu I had was where you changed their appearance, they had no noses, and then a moment later, they did! It'd be better if you kept it all in one style. But other than that, it was awesome, great to watch, funny, too!

Good job.

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MichaFrario responds:

Well they're called "chibi's"

They were in Dio, and due popular demand I brought them back!

[Darfur Satire Shorts]

High quality animation

The plots were also very well laid out. You did a brilliant job of emulating south park and transformers. The jokes were funny, and it's great that you're backing your animation with not-so-subliminal messages. Good job. 10/10. 5/5. I don't have any suggestions for improvement, except perhaps that after the south park short, it goes back to the menu instead of flowing straight into the transformers short.

Cheers.

WB

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[Sand]

Nice idea

The execution of the idea could have been better, though.
It's too short to develop much interesting happenings. The FBF drawing could be better, it needs to have more artistic flare, if you know what I mean. It'd be great if you could animate the wave FBF, to give it a more fluent and natural motion, although I imagine it would be tricky to pull that off well, the wave, as you have it now requires a more natural edge to it, it doesn't really flow like a wave should. I did like the concept, it's interesting, kind of reminds me of the "Pass my flash" collab. I think if you could get that sort of vibe with the animation, it'd be more appealing.
Nice start, I'd like to see this idea developed further, though.

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