WritersBlock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Godzillas Depression]

Graphics need to improve

Yeah, the combination of sprite/hand drawn does make godzilla look very weird. You should definitely stick to one style throughout the flash. The FBF type stuff is done pretty average. You should try doing a lot more tweening, create symbols for each moving part you have. That way, the movement will be a lot more smooth and everything will be neat and organised. The buildings didn't look good at all. You should probably make them straight and give them a bit of depth, maybe try drawing buildings based on pictures of real buildings. Also, if you have a microphone, it'd be nice to get some voice acting into this, it's quite plain with the speech bubbles. If you don't have a microphone, if you improve your animating standards you could maybe get a voice actor to work with you.
The plot could've been worse, but it wasn't great. I mean, godzilla attempting suicide because some guy said that he's got no genitals? And the gun, it's all quite random. If you work on that, a more fluent plot, better graphics, I think you'd do okay.
Not bad but you've still got a way to go. Hope I helped.

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[Inside the mind of SBC]

Nothing unusual thar!

Although I couldn't help but notice a severe lack of melting clocks. And you probably could have added a couple of sundials here and there.
But on the whole, I think you touched on some pretty interesting materials.
Can you do my mind next?
Do me! Do me! Do me!
Wait, that comes out wrong...
Oh, what the heck, do me anyway =P

It's a nice abstract animation.

BlueHippo responds:

i'd make a cartoon about writersblock, but i figure it would be easier and more ironic to say i tried and couldn't come up with anything ;D

[A piece of puke]

<3 style

The style is great. The animation had a kind of Dan Paladin style about it. It was funny, it was random. It was very random.
I think that if you can come up with a good plot with some substance, and keep up the humour you used here, that and your smooth funky animation style, you could snag yourself an award or 2.

10/10 because it's just so slick, and the animation is top notch, and it made me laugh. Even though I think you need to make it longer, extend a plot out, but keep the randomness.

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[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

Weird...

I didn't find the joke all that funny, it was very random, but not in a "lolwtf" way, just a "wtf" way. The graphics were quite basic, but I agree with NintendoMadness about the south park style heads, I liked that. I thought the concept of the genie coming out of the bong was funny, but I think the direction from there was just... not... that good. So, improvements on plot and graphics, give the plot some length, or else, make sure so have a very good punchline for your main joke.

Keep at it, it wasn't too bad.

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D3m0n1c707 responds:

thanku
ur review was probly one of the most use full
the only comments more help are one that are haters THANKS

[The Fairy Future Mother]

Alright

The plot was pretty funny, voice acting was good. Graphics had effort put into them, but there's room for improvement there. I think that your art style could be better, but you did pretty decent with what you've got. I think you've got a fair amount of promise for the future. With a bit of practice, the cartoons will look better, but everything else was really enjoyable.
So, good work, and good luck with your future projects.

WB

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[CandyHolics]

It's not bad

Good parts:
Script is pretty good, it's not hilarious, but it's funny.
Graphics are somewhat decent, although a little basic, still, good.
Voice acting was also pretty good.
The reference to newgrounds related characters was great, sort of like an inside joke... I can't see too many people going trick or treating as steve IRL, so that just makes the joke a bit over-the top. I liked that.
Bad parts:
The audio was a bit fuzzy at times, so it could have been a lot cleaner.
Jokes could have been funnier, they weren't very subtle, so there's some room for improvement there, but it's better than most.
Graphics are passable, but there is definite room for improvement, the animation isn't quite the slick, smooth animation you see in tankmen or other well animated cartoons, but it's not too far off.
Overall:
It's a very decent flash, it's not amazing, but it's definitely something to be proud of.
Good job.

WB

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, I'll keep those in mind.

+Hylian-Mafia+

[Gamer Tonight - FPS Gamer]

lol

so true
Art style reminds me of Family Guy.
Good job. I thought it was really good.