Haha, better than your average
homemade film. It's not hollywood, but the camerawork and script was pretty well executed. Maybe some lighting issues here and there, I'm going to guess that the sound was the quality it was because of the overall film's quality being reduced a bit. I thought the ending was, for the most part, decent, but the dancing around felt a bit out of place. Great use of humour, I think you guys did a decent job. Well done!
Thanks for the review. We did a couple of shots of the ending, but it just seemed to be the only one that went with the movie. I really don't know what else would have fit there though.
Perhaps we should invest in some mics to make the sound better. That's the only thing that is really missing from our movies now.
Great work
The illustrations were wonderful, the voicework was brilliant, and the story, impeccable. Congratulations on making a success out of your storybook collab. Only thing to note is that the text is a little hard to read. This would have been a much bigger problem if the voices weren't as clear as they were.
I've seen your works in the Storybook Collab; you're very poetic and literate, so this kind of reception is truly wonderful. Thank you for checking this out and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!
The text issue has been fixed; enjoy!
I very much look forward to seeing you deliver something for the Collab yourself; I hope to see you on here soon doing similiar business!
Cheers, and best of luck to you in your own ventures!
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Lol quoted me. :3
A classic Lochie humourous short. Ahh, the style of old film and lochie ^___^ meld together unexpectedly well. I laughed, I 5'd, I give you a pat on the back, my fine sir.
I'm now "leet". Care to go for a joyride in my ROFLcopter?
<3
I also wear a paper bag on my head.
I think it's great how they continue at it at the end, even though there's plenty more apples to go round.
I was wondering, how would the guy with the paper bag eat an apple anyway, without removing his paper bag? I saw no mouth on that character! And the one that was all mouth and no body, how did he manage NOT to eat it?
Simple storylline, elegant and well executed. Music was great. An all around class act. *thumbs up*
That's a good question!
They didn't wan't to eat the apple anyway, they just wanted to fight over it. :)
I think that
it was good.
Fun. Nice. Random.
Perfect for people like me with a short attention span.
Maybe if you added something shiny in there... or a red ball...
Oh, and you spelled "End" wrong, that was the part at the end of the movie, you spelled it "edn". Might want to fix that.
I'll be waiting for your return from Bel Air, so that you can make more awesome flash movies.
=D
A red ball would have fitten perfectly, I don't know why I didn't put that in! D:
I'll be back from Bel Air soon.
Thanks! :D
/edn reply.
Awesome
Love dan paladin's art style, and I think you totally nailed the flathead look in the submission. Congrats on snagging a prize for pico day, well deserved. Thanks for using my audio, and sharing a cut of the prize with me, it was a very pleasant surprise.
Well done!
=/ yeah
That song sucks bad. I agree that the use of the guitar hero controller was funny, and the animation wasn't too bad, but I think that you could have put more detail into it. For example, instead of having the lyrics on the screen, maybe have images that reflect the lyrics. You could have it so that it's night time, and they're sitting by a camp fire, and a faded image of harry potter or gandalf would appear in the sky. That's just me with ideas, but, yeah, something like that would really bring the graphics up a notch and make it more interesting. But as it is, it was quite well done, good lip synching.
Keep it up!
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